There once was a boy that had no family. He was raised by
the wolves in the woods. He grew from a small boy into a man that respected the
woods very much. It was his home.
When he was old enough to separate from his wolf brothers
and their den he set off on an adventure to find a new home. He walked through
the forest talking to the birds and other animals he met along the way.
He thought he would never run out of the dirt path through
the magical place he lived. It was getting dark and he thought he should find a
place to sleep. He climbed a tree and found a nice spot to rest his head. He gave
a quick howl that echoed through the forest so his brothers could hear that he
was safe for the night.
He drifted off to sleep when he heard a ruckus coming from
below the tree. He opened his eyes and to his surprise there were others like
him. There was a man and a woman having an argument below his tree. Robin Hood
listened to what they were saying.
“Give me that purse or I will bring harm to you!” said the
man.
“This is all I have and I am better off dead without it,”
she screamed back.
The man then threw the woman against the tree Robin Hood was
in.
Robin didn’t know much about humans. He had only been raised
with wolves. Something inside him told him what was happening was not right. He
had to take action against the man that hurt the lovely lady. He then grabbed a
tree branch and let out a cry of war that he and his brothers used.
He then swung down from the tree knocking the man off his
feet. He grabbed the bag and through it back towards the girl who was laying
below the tree. He then crouched down like he did with his brothers before they
were about to fight. The man pulled out a knife and pointed it towards Robin.
He was not afraid he knew his brothers would be on their way. He then howled the
war cry again and growled at the man.
The man did not know what was happening. He was scared
because he had not seen this behavior in a human before he then dropped the
knife and started running towards the town he had snatched the girl from.
When he got back to town he told the town about the boy that
lived in the woods. The towns people wanted to know what he looked like and he
told them about how he mostly wore leaves for clothes and had a funny shaped
hat on his head. The towns people laughed at the thief and began calling the
boy in the woods Robin Hood for his behavior of giving the poor girl her purse
back, and for the way he dressed were you could not see anything but his eyes.
Author’s Note:
I liked the original story of Robin Hood. The unit I read
made him seem like someone else to me. I wanted to create a new image of him as
well, which is why I created the wolf brothers. There isn’t much about how
Robin Hood was raised so I wanted to explain his actions. I thought this would
be a good time to make the audience see that he was not familiar with how to
act with humans but he knew the difference from right and wrong. I also wanted
to create a connection between the woods and how that life is all he had ever
known.
Bibliography:
“Robin Hood’s Progress to Nottingham,” by Francis James
Child from The English and Scottish Popular Ballads (1882-1898).Story Link
Great retelling of the original story! I liked how you had Robin Hood grow up with the wolves, and not know who or what humans look like. That detail was truly great, because it really made it feel like he was born on the jungle. I didn't find any errors to report, so good job on that. Again, a very nice retelling of the story. I liked reading your version.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story! It was very easy to read and flowed very well. I did not see any grammar or spelling mistakes. I am a big Robin Hood fan, so I really enjoyed your picture! I like how different your story was from what we are “used to” with Disney’s version of Robin Hood. I am looking forward to reading your last few stories as we wrap up this class!
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ReplyDeletewow this is a cool take on the story of Robin Hood. I always love when people come up with creative back stories for characters and you have done just that. I really like how even tough he does not understand the people he is still able to see the difference between right and wrong. keep up the good work and i look forward to read more of your work.
Hi Sara,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story! I love the lore around Robin Hood. The only thing that I really noticed that was a little off was that Robin Hood’s name wasn’t mentioned until later, so I was a little confused if he was the same as the first person of not. Altogether, your story was an enjoyable read. It was paced really well and was really fun!